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Sunday, January 9, 2011

2-21. The Breach.

THE PLOT

An emergency message from the Denobulan Science Academy has Archer agreeing to divert Enterprise's course to Xantoras. This planet, which has long suffered from unstable governments, has fallen into the hands of a hard-line, xenophobic group that has declared that all off-worlders must leave immediately or face imprisonment or death. Three Denobulan scientists, working in caves far beneath the surface, cannot be reached and have no awareness of this order. Someone must get to them and get them out, before disaster strikes.

Archer secures an agreement from the hard-line Xantoran government that gives him three days to get the Denobulans out. He sends Mayweather, Trip, and Reed down to retrieve the scientists. Meanwhile, ships carrying offworlders are departing at a steady rate. When one of them suffers a reactor breach, the planet refuses to allow them to land. Archer takes them aboard Enterprise, where the injured are treated by Phlox.

The most severely injured man is Hudak (Henry Stram), an Antaran - a race with a long history of hostility against Denobulans. When he sees who the ship's doctor is, he flatly refuses to be treated by Phlox, leaving the doctor wrestling with the worst aspects of his own upbringing.


CHARACTERS

Capt. Archer: Despite his growth over the course of his experiences, he still has a tendency toward knee-jerk reactions to anything that doesn't line up with his own morality. His initial impatience with Phlox's dilemma, and his attempt to order Phlox to treat the Antaran against the man's wishes and against Phlox's own medical principles, do not serve him well. Fortunately, once he calms down he is able to push Phlox in a more constructive direction - namely, to try to persuade the patient to change his mind. His willingness to act quickly and on instinct serves him far better when dealing with the troublesome planetary government, though.

Trip: "If you don't move by the time I count to three, I'm gonna take my phase pistol and shoot you in the ass. One... two..." Another good supporting role for Trip. He is happy to volunteer to go down into the caves, despite his lack of experience with caves. He learns quickly, sufficiently so to take over for the last leg of the mission, and thinks and acts fast to prevent an accident from turning into a disaster. And, as the quote I chose to lead off with shows, I quite enjoyed Trip's exasperation and loss of patience when the Denobulan scientists prove less than grateful for the rescue.

Dr. Phlox: This episode shows us a lot more about the Denobulans' background. We have thus far only seen them as scientists and intellectuals. In this episode, we learn that they have a military past - and not an entirely benign one. Brought face-to-face with a member of a species his people had fought and demonized, Phlox has to wrestle with his own buried prejudices. The way Phlox stares at Hudak the moment the unconscious man is wheeled in, and then hesitates to even approach him, tells us a lot even before the man wakes up and denies treatment. Phlox's outburst at how "no Denobulan would want to be in a room with (him)!" and his confession of having nightmares about Antarans are well-scripted, and Billingsley plays all the different emotions Phlox runs through with his accustomed excellence.

Mayweather: Though this is not a Mayweather-centric episode, it does have a strong role for him... probably a stronger one than the cliched histrionics of Horizon provided. Instead of just running Mayweather through the same character issues, this episode uses his love of climbing, and plausibly expands it to include cave exploration. The result has Mayweather effectively put in charge of the landing party. It's a good role for him, and Anthony Montgomery's performance goes up a notch from its usual "blank slate" in response to actually getting something decent to play.


THOUGHTS

Though not a standout, The Breach is a solid standalone episode, with some good character work for Dr. Phlox and solid supporting roles for Archer, Trip, and (astonishingly) Travis. The Phlox/patient scenes start out seeming as though we are going to learn the important lesson that "prejudice is bad." Surprisingly, writers Chris Black and John Shiban construct a script that at least attempts to go a little deeper than that, with some good results.

Phlox is quite obviously not a racist. He is, however, a product of a culture where he grew up surrounded by fear and hatred of the Antarans, and the prejudice against this "other" couldn't help but become ingrained. Intellectually, he knew this to be irrational, and he worked to set a more positive example for his children. But when a prejudice becomes rooted to the level of being instinctual, simply knowing it's irrational isn't enough to completely overcome it.  As a result, Phlox is left to battle his own instinctive reactions to his patient, along with his patient's similar reactions to him. The scenes of conversation between the two men, doctor and patient, are some of the more maturely, intelligently scripted moments in Enterprise's run, and both actors are terrific.

The "B" plot is also engaging. The caverns in this episode are a far cry from the "cave sets" of earlier series. We have deep chasms, that feel almost like bottomless pits. A genuinely well-shot and fairly exciting slide, which nearly kills all three members of the landing party. A passage with a very low ceiling, which Trip and Reed must slide through on their bellies. It's claustrophobic and effective.

Even better, the character interactions among the landing party work. Mayweather's confidence in his own abilities to handle these caves helps this to be one of the strongest Mayweather episodes ever, Trip's instinctive reactions to each situation feel correct for him, and Reed's security instincts help him to identify the correct path to reach the Denobulans. Even the Denobulans' infuriating stubbornness about leaving is given a good reason. Their "rock samples," as Trip dismissively calls them, can provide data to help their world substantially, making it believable that they would be reluctant to leave the work half-done.

The episode does suffer from the typical Trek failings, though. Both plots are wrapped up a touch too tidily. The landing party has a far-too-easy time getting back out of the caves.  An attempt to create tension during the final phase of the episode makes for an entertaining scene with Archer, but fails to actually raise the stakes or create any suspense. In the "A" plot, we get some wonderful characterization from Phlox, talking about his grandmother and his children. But Hudak remains mostly uncharacterized. We don't know much of anything about his background, beyond his hatred of Denobulans, so it doesn't mean anything when he finally agrees to Phlox's treatment. Our concern is entirely for Phlox, as we aren't given any reason to care about the patient, one way or another, at all.

Despite these fairly standard limitations, this is a thoughtful episode and a well-made one.  It's hardly the best of Trek, but compared to a lot of this season's offerings, it stands out as an engaging and thoughtful piece.


Rating: 7/10.

Previous Episode: Horizon
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Sunday, December 26, 2010

2-17. Canamar.

THE PLOT

Archer and Trip, traveling in Shuttlepod One, are mistaken for smugglers.  They are confined on board a prison ship heading for the prison planet Canamar. When a group of prisoners stages a jailbreak, seizing control of the ship, Archer decides to play the part of the smuggler he was arrested as.

He talks Kuroda (Mark Rolston), the mastermind of the escape, into allowing him to act as pilot. But when Archer discovers that Kuroda intends to destroy the ship, with all aboard, to fake his own death, he must take desperate action to avoid a slaughter!


CHARACTERS

Capt. Archer: He does a good job of sizing up Kuroda, and manages to maintain his cover while keeping Kuroda from killing anyone. His faith in T'Pol and his crew shows itself in that, prior to the prison break, he is willing to sit still and trust that he and Trip will be found and released (which, indeed, was about to happen). His exchange at the end with the Enolian official shows once again how very well Scott Bakula does "angry" scenes. That's a strength he didn't often get to show on Quantum Leap, and one which this show's writers would be well-advised to take more advantage of.

Trip: His engineering skills allow him to provide the prison transport with a fatality-free escape from two warships at one point. When Archer delegates to him the near-impossible task of subduing the Naussican to prevent Kuroda's plan to destroy the ship, Trip uses guile to trick the Naussican into a vulnerable position. It's also amusing watching Trip deal with a particularly talkative and annoying bench-mate.

Villain of the Week: Mark Rolston is Kuroda, the ruthless master criminal who engineers the takeover of the prison transport. He is an effective enough villain, even if all he's missing a mustache to twirl and a damsel to tie to some railroad tracks. He does take a liking to Archer, or at least to Archer's assumed smuggler persona.  There are hints of a deeper characterization when he talks about the first time he was sent to prison, and how that put him on his current path. Unfortunately, that one scene aside, he's pretty much a black-and-white villain. Adequate to help carry a standalone episode like this, but that one scene hints at something more that might have been done with this episode's basic set-up.


THOUGHTS

Canamar is a filler episode with a stock plot. It's well-done filler, as far as it goes.  But following on the heels of three strong episodes, all of which felt like they were advancing the show's overarching world and characters, even a decent filler episode has a slightly empty feel to it.

Also, while it works well enough within the confines of being a stock plot, there are a few moments (Kuroda's story about his first conviction, Archer's outrage at the offical at the end) which point to how this episode could have had much more depth, and could have done much more with its basic concept. Unfortunately, these moments exist almost in isolation from the rest of the show. Canamar is reasonably fun to watch.  So was Civilization, back in Season One. Like that episode, Canamar leaves the viewer with a slightly hollow feel.

It does its job of filling 45 minutes in an entertaining manner. But it's too content to be ordinary, when a little more thought could have made the episode into something more interesting.  Passable filler, but a bit dispiriting in its sheer ordinariness.

Rating: 5/10.

Previous Episode: Future Tense
Next Episode: The Crossing

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Sunday, December 12, 2010

2-13. Dawn.

THE PLOT

Trip is testing an upgrade to the shuttlepod's autopilot system when, out of nowhere, an alien ship appears and attacks. Trip is forced to crash on a nearby moon, which conveniently has a breathable atmosphere, to try to effect repairs. But the alien has crashed, as well. Soon, Trip finds himself taken captive, working to repair the alien's ship while attempting to find a way to communicate.

Meanwhile, the Enterprise's search for Trip is interrupted by the arrival of the Arkonians, whose missing man, Zho'Kaan (Gregg Henry), is responsible for shooting Trip down. They tentatively agree to coordinate their search. But their suspicions are inflamed by the presence of T'Pol, the Vulcans being hated by this particular race.


CHARACTERS

Capt. Archer: Though one can see his negative reaction to the Arkonian captain's "leave at once" ultimatums, he wrestles down his temper in order to negotiate for the Arkonians' help in rescuing Trip and Zho'kann. He listens to T'Pol's confession of the Vulcans' past with the Arkonians without being judgemental, showing character progress (first season Archer would have leapt on such a confession), nor does he gloat when T'Pol admits that he did better with the Arkonians than the Vulcans did.

Trip: A Trip-centric episode.  Yes, another one.  Even allowing for him being one of this show's "Big Three," there have been a few too many Trip episodes lately. How about a nice piece for Hoshi, or a Phlox episode?

That said, this was a much better episode for Trip than Precious Cargo was. His engineering resourcefulness allows him to get both himself and the alien off the planet. His dealings with Zho'Kann are very well-played. Trip never shows weakness to the alien, but he does everything he can to work with him and to show that he geniunely wants to work together to get them both off the planet. It's rough diplomacy at best, but it's fair to say that this kind of interaction helps to turn a likely enemy into a potential ally.

T'Pol: Has grown to respect Archer and his command enough to instantly trust him with the background on the Arkonians. When Archer is able to effectively deal with Arkonians' captain to help rescue both Trip and Zho'kann, she readily admits that Archer's approach to them was far more effective than the Vulcans' had been.


THOUGHTS

Dawn opens with Trip making a crack about how the upgraded autopilot will make Travis Mayweather redundant. Hasn't the show itself already done that?

The episode is basically a blend of the science fiction movie Enemy Mine and the old TNG episode, Darmok. It's highly derivative, but that's actually OK in this case.  Dawn isn't going to make anyone's Top Ten, but it's a well-made and well-paced 45 minutes of television. We get a little more background on the Vulcans' intervention with other warp-capable species, showing us that Archer's reaction to Vulcan interference is far from unique. Between the Andorians and the Arkonians, one begins to wonder if the Vulcans haven't been making as many enemies as friends with certain of their policies.

At the same time, Trip gets a strong spotlight episode. Arguably, the show's been overdosing on Trip-heavy episodes of late.  But perhaps somebody reasoned that after Precious Cargo, a competent Trip episode was needed to repair the damage.

Rating: 6/10.

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