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Monday, October 14, 2013

4-22. These Are the Voyages...


And so at last, Enterprise's infamous final episode. Will it live down to its reputation?


THE PLOT

It is six years later... and the entire crew is still together, all still at the same posts they've held for roughly a decade now.  Meaning that the story starts with a major plausibility problem. Enterprise is on its way to the signing ceremony for the founding of the Federation, when they receive a message from Shran. He tells Archer that he is calling in the favor he is owed, and will need Enterprise to make a slight diversion in its route.

Shran's child has been kidnapped by some former associates. These criminals believe that he stole something, and are threatening to kill his daughter if he does not return it. Archer agrees to help - but he doesn't count on the high price that will be exacted before this adventure is concluded.

Meanwhile, in the distant future, Commander William Riker (Jonathan Frakes) watches the entire set of events unfold, through the wonders of his Enterprise's holodeck.


CHARACTERS

Capt. Archer: We are told that Archer hates giving speeches. Is that why he's so bad at them? In any case, we see Archer worrying and fussing over this speech in much the same way he worried and fussed over the introduction to his father's biography back in Singularity. He remains a loyal friend, and doesn't even seem to seriously consider rejecting Shran's demand for help. Scott Bakula may have been (understandably) disgruntled about this final episode, but his relaxed performance is actually better than much of the work he's done this season - though I could wish for more of a reaction to some late events.

T'Pol/Trip: In the six years since Terra Prime, they have kept up a neutral working distance. They still work together, but there is no relationship anymore. With reassignment coming up, T'Pol confesses that she is going to miss Trip.  This leads to a nice character moment in which Trip guarantees her that they will not lose touch with each other. With that level of feeling still existing, it seems strange that they would only be having that conversation now, but it does provide one of the episode's better moments.

Shran: Went on to marry Jhamel after the events of The Aenar, and eventually fell in with a criminal crowd after leaving the Imperial Guard. He faked his own death to evade them, which worked for a time. He retains trust in Archer, turning to the "pink-skin" for aid in his hour of need, and the two still work together. There's a sense in the first half of the episode that Shran is probably hiding something... but since Shran disappears from the episode's second half, this never gets any payoff.


THOUGHTS

The above points to one of the biggest problems with These Are the Voyages... There is the groundwork for a decent episode here.  The problems don't come from the basic plot.  A final adventure with Shran, just before attending the founding of the Federation?  Given the limits of a single-episode finale, that's actually not a bad starting premise.  With only one episode to work with, this was never going to be the next All Good Things...  But there's nothing wrong with the central story idea, which had the potential to at least make an enjoyable epilogue.

Then Rick Berman and Brannon Braga added the damn frame.


The story is framed by Riker (Jonathan Frakes) viewing these events in the holodeck while making a difficult decision related to the TNG episode The Pegasus.  The entire story is filtered through his viewpoint. This still didn't have to be disastrous, if the Riker/Troi bits had simply been used as bookends: A short opening scene and a closing scene to act as a button on the franchise would have been fine, had they otherwise left the Enterprise episode to work on its own.

Instead, Riker keeps interrupting the action for filler scenes.  We get pointless scenes of Riker listening to the regulars' confessions while playing the part of "Chef" (who we learn here was something of a counselor to the crew, even though that's never been alluded to in the preceding 97 episodes). Probably a good third of the episode is gobbled up by Riker - leaving inadequate time to properly develop the main story.

The result is inevitable: Dropped threads and abrupt script turns, which gradually sink a potentially decent episode.  There's much build-up to the effect that Shran is hiding something, and this feels in-character for the Andorian. The character's final mention of the episode has Archer implying that he's going to find out Shran's secret and drag it into the light.  But this is never followed up, because Shran disappears from the episode after that scene. 

Also, we are specifically told Shran's enemies cannot go faster than Warp Two.  This is a plot point, one we are given no cause to doubt.  With no explanation, however, they are somehow able to to catch up with Enterprise, and even manage to board the ship. How? Never explained. The aliens are able to do all this to generate an unconvincing crisis that comes out of nowhere, makes no sense, and is resolved (unconvincingly) just a few minutes later.


Add to that the idiocy of setting this story six years after the main series, while at the same time leaving all the characters exactly where they were in Terra Prime.  That's as idiotic as it is unnecessary. If you want a workaround that allows all of these characters to have moved on, but brings them together on the ship, simply throw in a line or two about how they've all been brought back together on their old ship for ceremonial purposes. That would be very plausible - far more so than trying to convince viewers that not a single member of the crew has moved on to anything more in their career (or personal relationships) in a six-year span!

I will say that the kidnapping plot works reasonably well for the first 30 minutes, with the rescue of Shran's daughter being one of the better-directed planetbound action scenes of the season.  Things only truly become dire in the final 15 minutes, when it's clear that the writers are trying to squeeze too much incident into too little time.

Had the Riker material been jettisoned, and the extra time used to flesh out the story, this would likely have been a reasonable final episode.  Speaking for myself, if a "button" was really needed to link Enterprise to the rest of the franchise, I'd have preferred to have seen bookends with an older Archer and T'Pol attending the launch of the TOS Enterprise.You could even have the same melding of the voice-overs (Archer, Kirk, Picard) over the TOS Enterprise in flight. The same thing would be accomplished, without gobbling up a good third of the episode or making the Enterprise regulars guest stars in their own series!

Judged simply as an episode, These Are the Voyages... is very flawed, but far from the worst of the series or even the season.  Judged as a finale, however, it is an almost complete failure, unworthy of the series (let alone the franchise!) it intends to celebrate.


Final Rating: 3/10.

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Sunday, August 8, 2010

1-05. Unexpected

Mork gets pregnant and lays a giant egg... Oops, sorry. Wrong show.


THE PLOT

The Enterprise encounters a cloaked alien ship, using its warp stream to fuel its damaged engines. After establishing communications, the aliens agree to allow Trip aboard their ship to help with repairs to their warp engines, so that they can return home. Trip has some trouble adjusting to a decidedly alien environment. However, he settles in eventually, with support from Ah'len, a rather interesting female member of the aliens' crew.

When Trip returns to Enterprise, he discovers that he gained more from this first contact than he'd bargained for... namely, he's pregnant! This is the subject of much teasing by Archer, T'Pol, and Dr. Phlox. Tracking down the alien ship to see what can be done about this becomes a priority for Trip, and they do eventually find the ship... Cloaked, and lurking in the warp stream of a Klingon battle cruiser!


CHARACTERS

Archer: Continues to display a naive enthusiasm, which finally comes close to getting him into trouble when he blunders into communications with the Klingons. How did he think a race of warriors was going to react to the news that a cloaked ship was lurking in its warp stream, creating malfunctions? Did he think the Klingons were going to invite the aliens aboard as honored guests? Only T'Pol's quick thinking, and the Klingons' own debt to Archer, prevents this encounter from becoming very messy. Even so, Archer has wasted a favor from the Klingon Empire. He needs to learn to think before barging into situations. But I hope he learns that lesson the hard way, by creating a very bad situation... rather than being, once again, bailed out of a situation before it turns really bad.

Trip: For all his enthusiasm about exploration, he reacts very badly to an entirely alien environment. Like Archer, he is very trusting of his alien hosts, never pausing to wonder if all these quasi-sexual "games" he is playing with Ah'len could possibly be anything more than what they seem. He remains a highly competent engineer, and a basically decent human being. Despite the "misunderstanding," he has no desire for revenge and brings no recriminations - he just wants his situation cured.

T'Pol: Seems out-of-character in her reaction to Trip's dilemma. Surely, as the most well-travelled member of the crew (save possibly for Dr. Phlox), it would occur to her that there might be alternate explanations for Trip's situation. Nevertheless, she is very fast to lay blame on Trip, and solely on Trip - honestly behaving less like a professional Science Officer, and more like a jealous girlfriend. That said, she appears to be the only member of the crew with an active brain this episode, stepping up to save Archer from a situation of his own making when things with the Klingons look ready to turn very, very ugly.

Hot Alien Space Babe of the Week: I'll say this for Trip - Scales or no scales, Ah'len really is quite appealing. She comes across as patient, charming, funny. And the makeup job is very good, sufficiently alien to convince that she is another species, but also sensual enough that Trip's attraction to her is believable.


THOUGHTS

Teasing? A valued member of the ship's crew comes back from a first contact situation pregnant - a medical first. The ship's doctor knows little or nothing about how the pregnancy might proceed (is there one young, or several? Are they surgically removed, or do they eat their way out? Are there any risks involved for Trip? Are there any risks to the crew?). The reaction of the ship's captain, doctor, and science officer is near-identical: teasing and mocking of Trip.

*thunks head on desk*

As truly dreadful as this episode sounds, it actually plays slightly better. The first (pre-pregnancy) half is actually quite good. The presentation of the alien ship is effective, particularly the steps taken to allow Trip to acclimatize to their environment. Trip has a realistic reaction to such an alien environment: He freaks out. He can't deal with it, not mentally or physically, and nearly bails on the mission before it's even properly begun. Trip's initial sense of disorientation is nicely conveyed with distorted camera lenses, as is his gradual easing into the situation.

Even when things turn stupid at the midpoint, the episode has one thing going for it: it moves. We don't labor on Trip's "condition" for long, before the Enterprise is facing a potential conflict with the Klingons - a conflict in which it is, once again, clear that Enterprise is far the weaker ship. Archer's attempts to talk down the Klingon captain play as pathetically to us as they do the Klingons. He does sound, just a bit, like a babbling fool, and the thought occurs again that while Archer is an essentially competent man, he is a man who is in far over his head, and one who desperately needs to learn the art of thinking before he speaks.

The fast pace, the effective presentation of the aliens, and the consistency of Archer's failings in new encounters (which, at this point, seem too consistently-presented to be accidental), combine to keep this episode quite watchable. It is still, however, the weakest Enterprise episode yet. "Man gets pregnant" is the kind of desperate high concept ploy sci-fi shows grab for in their fourth or fifth season, when out of ideas. It is not encouraging to see it trotted out as the fourth episode of a new series.


Rating: 5/10. With strong hopes that the next one is better.

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